Our Dance

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Wherever I journey,
You're sure to tag along ;
Wherever I trip,
You break my fall;
 
Whenever I sleep,
Your heart beats;
Whenever I laugh,
Your smile glows.
 
Should your day be quiet,
Look at the sky and see
Me ride a cloudy steed
And sprinkle slivers of sun.
 
I am the fullness of soaking rain,
That choir of loud singing frogs
Whose chorus your spirit lifts
Beside my dreams day or night.
 
Lift up your sullen face,
Let yourself find a smile,
Our days move so swiftly
In life's convoluted journey,
 
As we quietly dance together
Let our souls always entwine,
Our thoughts together enmesh,
Until our paths cross once again.
 
 
 

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Reviews

[theunionisloud]

Fresh, open, and free! I love how you show the ability to let go in positive light, though it has roots and hopes in rejoining together. Well done!

[Kerry O'Connor]

This could be read as a romantic message to a lover, but the hint afforded by the picture encouraged me to read it as from a parent to a child - and what a commitment to that child it suggests. This is a very special poem.