McFlurry Saved the Day

McFlurry Saved the Day

A Poem by redd Brick Keshner

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McFlurry was the beast
that preyed on the
old ogre of a day
spent too long
in lectures & humidity

Across the river
of the campus jungle
McFlurry crouched
and pounced upon
the grizzly weariness -

ripping it to shreds
with creamy razor teeth
& cookies & cream claws
as we ended yet
another uni day



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© 2011 redd Brick Keshner


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redd Brick Keshner
Disclaimer: This is not a McDonalds marketing stunt. :-)

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SEEMS THE MCFURRY WAS EATEN BY AN ANIMAL IN THE DISTANCE...BY THE WAY YOU CONVEY THIS IS IN THE LINES...SINCE YOU SAY IT SAVED THE DAY...

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Added on February 24, 2011
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redd Brick Keshner
redd Brick Keshner

Brisbane, West Moreton, Australia



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