Nature's way/See the flowers

kind of tree hugerish and and awkward but it was an "off the cuff" thing

See the flowers,
Pretty flowers.
See the grass,
Nice, green grass.
See the trees,
Big, tall trees.
Feel the freah breeze,
The nice, cool breeze.

Natures natural beauty
Your classic birthright
My stable barrier
This is nature's way

See the flowers,
Pretty flowers.
You know the way,
the nature way.
Silence, yes,
Quiet, yes.
Thinking time,
ponder time.

Nature's time to find it's potential
Your time to find you place
My time to find my path
This is nature's way
 

Author's Note

please comment good or bad I want them!

Reviews

[Alison Martin Lloyd]

very nice :) I really enjoyed reading it. Keep it up!

[Rylie]

I like it. The repetition on the way you described the things in it made me imagine feeling and smelling grass, leaning against a tree, and just being at peace. Good write!