Night

A Poem by EylonBear

first poem I ever wrote. I almost got it published but couldn't get a parent signature

My heart has blackened,
My soul is stripped,

I am ignored,unnoticed,
I spend my days waiting,

Waiting for the night
the night where I am loved.

© 2011 EylonBear

Author's Note

please comment good or bad I want them!

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Rylie

Wonderful!

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

paparapapa

Simple and direct to the point. ;)

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on May 27, 2009
Last Updated on November 9, 2011

Author

EylonBear

Manchester, NH

About

My name is Deena. I started writing in junior high with a novel. I never finished it. since then I've written a number of poems. a coupld short stories and I have one completed novel in the revision p.. more..