endless forest

I don't remember when or why I wrote this one.

Endless sky,

looming trees,

Never ending.

 

they seem to go on forever,

what am i to find in this endless forest,

in this endless nothingness.

 

i am lost,

i do not know where i am suppose to go,

what am i suppose to do.

 

Where do i stand?

the light is fading,

the sky turning red.

 

it is sunset,

thought i cannot see the sun,

i know.

 

all i can see is tree,

beautiful, majestice trees,

standing ever tall.

 

mayhap i shall stay here,

til the end of tiem,

in this endless forest.

Author's Note

Please comment good or bad I want them!

Reviews

[Rylie]

I liked it. I could see myself in the forest and looking at what was around me. Good write!

[paparapapa]

I can imagine the setting of this poem. Cool. But I think I would be scared if I were there. Haha. Anyway, great write.

[Free Writer]

I love this!!! I always wanted to find myself lost in a forest like that, it's so beautiful and I love the adventure of exploring a place like that. This is very beautiful and I found myself imagining myself there in the forest. I could picture everything, wonderful and great job!! :D

[Helena]

Beautiful visual piece....I felt I was there with you in "the endless forest".
Thank you for submitting this fine poem to my contest "A Chance to Shine"!

~ Helena

[Jessica]

i liked this. the imagery was great and very beautiful almost dreamy. good job!