Heart Of A Widow

another attempt at rhyming not as horribly bad as the last

It's made to be broken

The glass of a window

A small child's token

As the heart of a Widow

 

To be proven of worth

Not worth the wait

Even from the birth

Not worth the fate

 

For fate is strong

Worth is hard

And Wait is long

Not for lard

 

The pigs come home

Chickens to roost

Dogs get a bone

And babies a boost.

Author's Note

Please comment good or bad I want them!

Reviews

[GoodIntentiionz]

Not too bad rhyming there, good ABAB rhyming scheme. I liked this, although I cannot grasp at what you are saying, I like this. Good job.

[mattavelli]

it rhymes. :)

[deeps]

The pigs come home
Chickens to roos
tDogs get a bone
And babies a boost.

Such wonderful stanza there,
I like this, flowed wonderfully!