Tuesday

I thought of this while coming home from school. thinking of one night I spent with an amazing person.

thoughts of that night swirl in my mind,

watching as our fingers intertwined.

your hand brushes up my side,

and a shiver goes down like a tide.

I look up at you and you smile

with that I could go a mile

you brush your hand across my cheek,

my heart beats so hard i cannot speak.

you care about me, I know you do,

I just wish to be together forever to.

Author's Note

Please comment good or bad I want them!

Reviews

[unorthodox]

Short, simple, yet says so much. I love it! :)

[paparapapa]

Short, simple but amazingly beautiful. Oh, and sweet! :)) Great write. Keep on writing. ;)

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This is a wonderfully expressed poem - a memory of lovely delight.

[emmanem]

I ended up clicking on this because the poem's picture matched my avatar! Haha.
Anyways, I agree that it's short and sweet. I found it to be super cute. Good job!

[Comatose]

Wow, it's short and sweet but so full of meaning; absolutely beautiful!