the dragons fire

once the evil now to scorch it

The Dragon’s Fire

 

 

 

On the whispers of the wind

Just glittering with sin

As beautiful as the morning sun

Its evil reign has come

 

Hidden in flowers so sublime

They all foretold its coming of time

It seems so innocent and so clean

An obvious thing this evil fiend

 

Yet we fall in its trap

Though they are clearly labeled

Stuck to its pretty sap

The good of it is fabled

 

Something so beautiful is so deadly

Here comes the fire

Now are you ready?

 

You don’t see the dangers

And take all advice from the shadowed strangers

You ignore what true and listen to the liars

Now you’re in the dragons fire

 

You let the darkness surround

Your heart starts to pound

The fog creeps in hot

Burning away the cover up of what your not

 

The heat lingers driving you insane

Wondering when again it will rain

But again it eats at you

The fires coming a gain at a time it is due

 

Another hit is your realization

The last car finally pulls into the station

Now you pay for your deeds

One by one they’ve planted the seeds

 

The sprouts grow and we know

Something must be done

The evilness is at its best

The thing we speak of is overrun

 

Its reign came and no one’s to blame

The prophecy is being fulfilled

We call on the dragon to help us now

This thing must be killed

 

Not only are our burs healing

But we band now to fight

Once the ones who were pillaging and stealing

Are now the ones to make it right

 

One massive blow the fire goes

Enough the singe the world

But were ok, for today

Were protected in our word

 

Crisped to death when we needed it so dire

No more will it be in our attire

We won in a way that will inspire

With the dragons fire

Reviews

[Poeticpiers]

Dragons are a favourite subject of mine so naturally your title caught my attention.
I assume you prefer honesty So whilst I liked your subject May I suggest you pay attention to your rhyming and try to keep to a conisistent rhyme patters. Also to your meter which is the essential element which differentiates poetry from prose. Try to keep your line lengths the same one or two typos also You have used your where you should have use you're. A final spell check an re edit before posting adds authority to your work Advice offered to be helpful please excuse if it offends