Long walks through forever

Making long walks through forever

In the endless void our wishes

Obliterate

An apparition, never at night

I’m driving ‘till I’m out of sight

Sanity is just a myth

There’s none of this

And this is it

 

Making long walks through forever

And never really seeing

Though I can see so clearly

The fog is catching up

And down

Down below I’ll remain

And I’ll remain

Reviews

[Gaurav]

There are some very sane (though yes sanity is a myth) lines in your poem..especially 'down below i'll remain..i'll remain'
I can see your words depicting the brain and heart of a soul not confined in its body-thoughts albeit it moving out to wander...forever