Subtle Invisible

Subtle Invisible

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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Senryu

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"A Lesson Learned Too Late," "Hindsight is 20/20," "The Wisdom of ...

Subtle Invisible

Theft is Criminal
I am much wiser today
robbed of it in youth.

;) E.
10/24/2026

© 2025 Einstein Noodle


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Powerful Dramatic lines. Excellent poem

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Weeks Ago

:) .... thank you Arundass TP ... i appreciate you
E.
it’s not criminal to think back on one’s life…. even if you were a criminal… it always better to think of oneself as a model for the younger generation to ascribe to that… to give good examples….. i like the way you created this senryu …. it makes you think!
Warmly
B😊

Posted 2 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

luv on ya Betty .. you make me "Warmly" smiling :))))))))))) much appreciate you taking time
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Betty Hermelee

1 Month Ago

my distinct pleasure!!!
Warmly, B
Hi this is powerful. Any hurt to children or youth is indeed theft and criminal

Posted 2 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

Jules!! i did not expect that thought on this one ... yes! harm to children ... so vulnerable and in.. read more
theft of the innocent is a crime, and we don't know it is happening but with age comes wiseness , too late for some who are damaged .

Posted 2 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

oh yes, Stella ... so tragic the choices we make in recklessness, rebellion and/or addictions .. vio.. read more
What's the example: When I was a boy, I thought my father was a genius. When I was a young man, I thought I was the genius. When I was a father I tried to be a genius-type man. Now old I happily accept the fact that I had been a very a human being who tried his best - and told I near enough succeeded ! Perhaps we should start at the finish and do better as humans and for the planet?!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

ahahahaha yes ... such a foible eh! thanks so much for reading and leaving your wonderful thoughts .. read more
So short yet so identifiable. Life seems backwards somehow. Deprived of age's wisdom in youth and having it latter when it is not needed, the same for wealth. Why did I not have it when I needed it with children to support, now it just rots.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

ahahaha ... well ... i don't have enough to rot at the moment my friend ... but backwards it certain.. read more
Soren

2 Months Ago

You are most welcome
When we are young we believe we know everything there is to know. As we age, we realize that was not the case at all....but time is a thief and now that we are in the "golden" years, we can not do some of the things we want. Interesting senyru, E. Lydi**

Posted 2 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

so true, Lydi! so very true ... seems much of my wisdom these golden years is how wrong, mistaken an.. read more
It could be worse E... you could be far less wiserly, just like me be!
Life is way more confusing the older I get. I mean, for breakfast I had crunchy nut cornflakes yesterday. It said on the box " just pour milk, but it started leaking right through the cardboard before I was finished!
Now I know they meant put them in a bowl and just add milk, so I guess i am wiser today than yesterday at least! 😀

Posted 2 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

one day at a time eh, Lorry!? ;) the night before last I woke up and looked at the clock .... it sai.. read more

this is one of them subtle as a thrown brick near haiku thingies innit .. & so deceiving, bigger than it looks by far and punching well above its weight .. brevitas, succinctus superbus n all that jazz with a few bells n whistles thrown in for good measure .. I say's we woz both robbed .. if only the others could see it too .. Neville :))))) 😎👍



Posted 2 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

robbed blind eh Neville!? luv on ya!
E.
Ain’t that the truth. Hindsight is always too late. We need foresight well before time steals it.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

yeah, Andrew ... "if only" right!? :)))))))))
E.

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