Flashback
A Poem by
Fahmida
The only thing we do when we are alone is start remembering the past , the happy/sad moment.So this poem is based on this read and discover....:)
Flashback
When it blinks,
The memories
Flows a heavy quantity,
Remembrance of past,
Have conserve,
Pleasant smile on face,
Indicate the good one,
But it never came back,
The past time,
Silently remain in the heart,
The marvellous memories
Taking ahead to the future,
The presence,
When I turn to woe,
And no one to listen,
It takes me to flashback,
My eyes,
My mind,
My heart,
Make me hale again,
Fed my loneliness,
With it I shall walk through,
Like an eternal message,
Mandate me to choose right,
It bon voyage me,
To have bliss in future.
© 2013 Fahmida
Author's Note
Hi there, I guess you guys might have gone through this stage. So read ,like, comment.
I'm waiting for it.
Reviews
Yes, memories are some what like ever present angels who guide us through future events. You may "hale" them again and again as you need them to help you overcome woe and loneliness. I enjoyed the way in which you personified "memories", "flashbacks".
Posted 12 Years Ago
This is a really nice description of flashbacks, enjoyed this poem. Nicely done
Posted 12 Years Ago
This is a really nice description of flashbacks, enjoyed this poem. Nicely done
12 Years Ago
Thanks for reading.
When it blinks,
The memories
Flows a heavy quantity,
Remembrance of past,
I quite like this segment--like all you poem--but I do like the vision of heavy weeping these lines inspire.
Posted 12 Years Ago
When it blinks,
The memories
Flows a heavy quantity,
Remembrance of past,
I quite like this segment--like all you poem--but I do like the vision of heavy weeping these lines inspire.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
Thanks a lot.^_^
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Added on July 26, 2013
Last Updated on July 26, 2013
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Fahmida Bhiwandi., Islam, India
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