My Angel Of Devotion.

Poem on love.

My Angel of Devotion.

Walking together on a street,

A romantic mid night,

His love is, like a,

Deep blue ocean,

His is only,

My angel of devotion.

Make me dream beyond,

My own little world,

The relaxing arms,

Every moment, a slow motion,

He, my angel of devotion,

First kiss full of emotions,

Further increasing reaction…………..

Growing  feelings but little inhibition,

He my only angel of devotion,

Engage in love ,

No need of  instruction,

Great moment with good intention,

Holding me forever,

My angel of devotion,

His eyes flashes,

At me,

Speak the truth,

Take me along , there’s nothing to lose,

The real love begins ,

With my angel of devotion.

Author's Note

Read and enjoy. And plz do comment.

Reviews

[SquinklaPsyOps]

This is very interesting, the poem is about a person putting her guard down as she trustes another person to take her to Heaven to fulfill her life dream

[Fahmida]

Thanks a lot dear.Glad that u read.

[Rafia ~ Yellow Girl]

I felt happy while reading this piece , as i felt like listening to a song, the lightly tuned song of devotion and love, calm and soothing! Lovely share Fahmida :)!

[Fahmida]

Thanks a lot your comment means lot to me :)

[Elizebeth]

Very well written. :) I thoroughly enjoyed how sweetly written, and simple this is. :) It shows such love to someone whom I am hoping that is in your life, or will be at some point or another. :)

Great write. :)

Air.

[Fahmida]

Thanks! I'm glad that you like it.

[Elizebeth]

Keep up the great work. :)

[Pryde Foltz]

I wonder if you are not speaking to a lover unseen and immortal. Very nice write and lovely rhythm.

[Fahmida]

Thanks a lot XD

[ron]

It is how true love should be. To find it is a gift far above anything that can be seen. To feel it is to find the deepest of emotion. May you find it and feel it some day in your life.

[Fahmida]

Thanks for the comment.