When We Fall in love

Oh It's our first time to fall in love

When We Fall in love

It was Our first time

to fall in love

She was 19

and I was 21

We went on dates

We had lots of fun

To the movies

A walk to the park

Ice skating

at an indoor rink

where she showed me 

She had some moves on skates

A twirl a spin

and that was only the beginning

She leads me by my hand

around the rink

We stopped for a cup of Hot Coco

and we chatted about life for a while

I made her smile

For our first date

She thought it wasn't so bad

and wanted to ask for another

So I mention Starbucks For Lunch

We could catch up where we left off with our chat.

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

"When We Fall In Love"
Falcon1,
That first connection is so important.
Of course there is still so much to learn about the other person.
This poem is a nice foray into the early layers which could build
into something stronger with time.
"When we fall in love
It was our first time
to fall in love
she was 19, I was 21"
To see people's joy in the
early gratfullness of meet-
ing is just lovely!
I really appreciated the fresh-
ness of your poem and simple
message. Not complex just
nice.
Ice skating is mentioned. I
found it sweet that your
date enjoyed showing you
her experience in the process.
"At an indoor rink
where she showed me
she had some moves on skates
a twirl, a spin
and that was only the beginning"
A caring picture of thoughtful and
generous time together.
It sounds like a dream a person does
not want to awaken from.
Also the coco and the ideas shared.
For our first date
She thought it wasn't o bad
and wanted to ask for another
Ao I mention Starbucks For Lunch
We could catch up where we left off with our chat."
Did something in particular bring this poem to your
mind? Experience or something of that nature.
Lovely one!
Blessings,
Kathy

[mercy party]

simple is good. the poem was so serene and sweet but the falling in love stuff gets a bit hectic after your next chat and downing sugar coffee for lunch could cause you to say the wrong thing. fun.

[Najam Us Saher]

An interesting poem. Beautifully written I love the first lines.