She is as sharp as eagles eyes

With a loving voice

She sings to me

Oh what are the chances

That in her voice she will awaken a love

and she will choose me as the one

She has the lovely voice 

That I ever heard

The voice of an Angel

So heavenly It's absurd 

She won me over this time 

It's true she knows I mad about her too

A love so pure as good as gold

Soaring like an Eagle

High above the forest

Eyes that don't deceive

Yes I want to believe

That she truly Loves me Too

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This graceful verse includes many of my favorite ideas . . . singing to someone is such a sweet seduction . . . eagles & forests symbolize the best aspects of freedom & acceptance . . . plus I always relate to nature as a blueprint for our fledgling human overtures *smile* Must be one lucky lady to have inspired these words from you! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Coyote Poetry]

So beautiful. A wonderful journey in your words. I liked the places your described. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[wordman]

and i know she does,she told me she did

[Jes' Pi]

A very sweet poem about someone who loves an earthly angel.

The title tells me that the poem is about a song, a calling or a novelty.

The description of this divine being is not very detailed but it has the necessary elements. The one who fell in love is amazed and desperate. Why amazed? Because he saw for the first time a special woman, invisible to his eyes until now. Why desperate? Because he is afraid that the angel will fly away with his fragile human heart.

In conclusion, the poem is emotional and (somehow) heartbreaking. The only suggestion I have is to change the title because it doesn't have a strong touch with the poem(in my opinion). Maybe you should choose one of the words you used to describe the woman.

I really enjoyed the poem and I can't wait to read more! Good luck!