In the mud of Love

Don't step in that puddle of mud it could be the mud of love

Please don't step in that puddle of mud,

you could dwell in that watered down love.

You could be in the mud of love,

She could be unkind and rip out your heart 

and make you go blind.

For it's all in a matter of time.

She will do it with a bottle of wine,

She will treat you like you were a swine.

She will use you until she finds another,

to fit underneath her covers.

to keep her body safe and warm,

From a winter's storm.

She will kick you out, when you think you're warm.

But you know you been warned.

Don't count her as a friend indeed,

she will always be your friend in need.

Take good care of yourself, 

before she puts you in an early grave.

Don't become her slave,

Don't cave into her ways.

For you will step in that puddle of mud,

Where you won't find much love.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Great wisdom shared in the below lines.
"For you will step in that puddle of mud,
Where you won't find much love."
I liked the tale in the poetry and the ending logic. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Jes' Pi]

Hi.

The symbolization of the poem makes me feel comfortable and satisfied, as the result of its freshness. This theme is one of my best-loved themes, I can say...it is morbidly intense.

Love may be the most viperous feeling that gets us to the extremity of psychopathy. It is like a delicious and aromatic drink which makes us vulnerable and obsessed...like joy...
...dragging us into the deepest mud.

I will rectify a few mistakes:
"She will do it with a bottle of wine,"
"She will kick you out when you think you're warm."
"Don't cave into her ways."

If you like this kind of themes, you should try them more often. This time was pretty good.

Good luck!