Heaven Seeker

Looking for the divine love of Jesus Christ

heaven seeker and the honey bee

Lord if it was up to me

Both would serve their time with you 

Blessed in time for the growing of the fruits and plants

of the earth to sustain mankind

On the face of the earth

Bee make honey

and they also pollenate the plants and the trees

Which Makes us the air we breeze

It just wouldn't be possible for life

If It wasn't for the bees like these.

So I say dear Friend God Bless the bees.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree my friend. The bees are a blessing for us. I loved the story and the logic of your amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote

[Davidgeo]

"Bee make honey" ... or do bee's make honey?

The last stanza is scientifically inaccurate. Plants don't make the air and bees are not the sole mechanism of pollination. The decreasing bee population is most likely cyclical over tens of thousands of years... as we discover more about there long term presence via the fossil record it becomes clear that extreme dips in their population is not at all abnormal... you present the fashionable alternative as fact (likely due to a certain recently added Netflix documentary) The logic of this poem crumbles under those facts... renders your "bee" theme irrelevant... makes your religious undertones look ignorant and silly.

I get what you're going for... it's just... poorly reasoned as you present it.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

"Heaven Seeker"
Falcon1,
The photo is very fitting for this poem! Majestic message
told through nature's pollinator.; such a nice message:
First line "Heaven seeker and honey bee"
Fourth line "Blessed in time for the fruits and the plants."
The whole poem is one of thankfulness and I like how it
ends with more thankfulness:
"If it wasn't for the bees like these.
So I say dear friend God Bless the bees."
Nicely done!
Blessings,
Kathy

[Falcon1]

Thanks Kathy for tantalizing My poem so sweetly Your remarks make me smile heavenly.