Sleep Child Sleep

For the love of a child I hold dear.

Poem title Sleep Child Sleep

Falcon1

Sleep Child Sleep

Don't you make a peep

Come on my Grand Daughter Dear

Let your mind Clear!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Gentle, kind and beautiful words shared my friend. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Davidgeo]

You should probably just post what you have to write without the picture gimmick. It cut off the end of the third line. It wasn't helping anyway.

It's a bad idea to use visual media sometimes, it comes off as a crutch if you don't do it right. The backdrop picture crap, yeah, you're not the first to try it... it's almost always a waste of everyone's time and it is very far from original.

Focus on the writing first. Worry about the flair later.