Graveyard of Ember Butterflies

I stand at Fire's Fury
The world around is ablaze
Turning everything to Darkened Ash
Reality ripples, into a play...
I stand at Night's Glow
This Night of passion and lost
Loveless graves share their song
Echoing through the halls of a candle-lit sonata...
Butterflies of Ember dance around me,
Each A Memory
Of A Sin, that was onced stainned
Each A Tale
Of Life, that was onced lived
Each A Song
Of Love, that was onced loved
The most beautiful moment in Time
Is when the Butterflies let go
Of Me...
 

Reviews

[deathbroken]

Powerful words. =]
"Each A Memory
Of A Sin, that was onced stainned
Each A Tale
Of Life, that was onced lived
Each A Song
Of Love, that was onced loved"
my favorite part of the poem.
I love the rhythm and the effect.
on the less serious not.
im baaaaaaaaaack. =D =D
come review my poems if you have the time yeah =]
im trying to capture my writing skills again.