Broken Pieces

to lose love and letting it all go

Alone in the velvet dark
Surrounded by the remains
Of my shattered heart

Shards embedded deep
In my bleeding soul
As my weary spirit weeps

I cannot breathe anymore
My flesh is torn and tattered
My body is crumpled on the floor

I want to let go of this pain
To let go of my grip on you
But you are my permanent stain

Giving in to the inner voice
That guides my trembling hand
This is no longer my choice

Crimson blood pours out in rivers
I do not want to carry on without you
The cold sets in as my body shivers

I give up my last hope and dream
Letting you flow out of my mind
With my last breath your name I scream

Broken pieces floating in my blood
There is no use for this life now
I have lost your perfect love

Reviews

[Faith]

loved it...as others said..the flow here is perfect..really kept me going...
great write once again...
:D

[deeps]

Such a emotional write here, I can feel this.
Like the flow of this.

[Lexi Nicole]

So sad, but amazing work. The flow is perfect and the imagery is flawless. There's so much emotion in each and every line of this piece. Great work!

-Howl