You lost me.

I've posted this as a poem but I'd probably see it as more of a monologue. yet again it's a work in progress, kinda channeling some anger into this. Suggestions greatly appreciated.

I'M going to lose YOU again? Ehh. You f*****g left me. You left me for some other arsehole when he caught you with me. Picked him over me. You literally decided he was better right in front of me.Now you're back, telling me you love me saying you wish you'd never left. Should've guessed you were having trouble with arsehole. But the funny thing is you still won't get rid of arsehole. Why's that ay? Prick. Did you honestly think you could just come back and everything will be great again? You were gone when I needed you. When I cried myself to sleep, when I f*****g hurt myself. where were you then? You were off f*****g him. Telling me to f**k off when I needed you most. But, I've come to realise I don't need you. You took the sun when you left, but now I have the moon and it's pretty f*****g beautiful and at least I can f*****g look at that without going blind. And you say I'm going to lose you again?? I never lost you in the first place, you lost me.

Author's Note

Please don't hold back on this, lying won't improve my writing!

Reviews

[d.m.vargas]

Intense with a slight of humor, “at least I can f*****g look at that without going blind.” Funny. Why do pricks always get the girls? Maybe that should be your next poem.

[Fallen Phoenix]

Hmm yes maybe! Thank you. :)