A Living Hell

My very first Acrostic ever done.

Again I woke stiff and sore

Less movement than the day before
Inside my head swims memories
Visual clues of what used to be
Into my past I travel now
Not really knowing when or how
God placed me upon this path

He seems to have visited upon me his wrath
Every day I wonder why
Little by little I want to die
Lost within a mere shell, my very own living hell

Reviews

[Daytonight]

What an amazing acrostic you penned for it to have been your very first! Great work! Keep on penning.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

A wonderful acrostic that paints a vivid image of the poet's pain. Well done! I feel for you, arthritis runs rampant in my family and with each day I feel it trying to set in, it seems the more I move around the better I feel even though I do pay for it later.

[Fritz O'Skennick]

An awesome acrostic with wonderful flow & great rhyme that makes for a short & bitter sweet read that engages your reader throughout...
Keep up the great work...
Well done!!!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Very meaningful, rythmically very secure and compact!

"Lost within a mere shell, my very own living hell"
punch-line!