Break into my thoughts

A randomly written poem . A message is hidden in it .

Break into my thoughts; there you will find many a things
a garden of delicate flowers,try to water them with your love
a cluster of thick grey clouds filled with disappointments,try to break them with your genuine smile
a deserted land with hot troublesome air all around,try to make it lively by offering your valuable presence to it
a tree of pure bliss and compassion , try to hold onto its branches and climb on top of it
and a river so calm and serene with ripples forming of true desire, just sit nearby and feel its flow..

Author's Note

A random one .. hope you easily grab the meaning from it :)

Reviews

[Rooman Shahab]

This is such a beautiful poem!!

[Syeda Ayesha]

Thanks dear:)

[SAYED THANGAL]

This poem itself is a means to break the barriers, most of the problems and miseries are the product of our deeds. there lies every thing in the nature to console us, as this poem states, but we should open our eyes.
sayed thangal

[Syeda Ayesha]

yes I agree with you to some extent :) btw thanks :)

[Rida Sarwar]

awesome! :D Love it! :) deep and meaningful :)

[Syeda Ayesha]

Thanks a lot ! :D

[Rida Sarwar]

pleasure :p