Life of School.

Based on the school life..

We first entered the school,
Met some wise and some fool.
No understanding as a littler,
Teachers were strict as hitler.

Refuse to do homeworks,
Bunking with the best chappie,
Screwing each others sleep,
We used to be happy.

Staring at a crush,
She smiles and we blush.
Friends try cheering me up,
Kicking them makes them shut up.

There was no fair in farewell,
Never get apart we tried,
Mysterious! on the first day we cried,
On the last day we cried.

Author's Note

Ignore grammer mistakes

Reviews

[송지ፏ..]

My high school was awfully strict, but we were all use to it and we did our work. It would have brought shame to our family's names.

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Well school time is the cakes and ale like time on our life...it's just the humorous truth that I burst into cry at the last class....but at my first class was gigging looking at the board...as I didn't knew any of the alphabet!
The rhyming here in your poem is pretty cool...thanks for sharing!

[Najam Us Saher]

I can totally relate to the line On the first day we cried on the last day we cried. I really did cry on both the days. 😀 Every line is so relatable. Well written. I loved this poem. You are a keen observer I must say.

[MadWaffles]

I like it, and it is okay if you make grammar mistakes. You are not a dictionary, encyclopedia, or thesaurus. I expect to see grammar mistakes from everyone every now and then. After all, we are only human. So don't worry.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you sooo much😊 it means alot

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Except for the Grammer, forgive me I'm not criticizing your talent!!
There is truth in this, the way school life is expressed is actually general... The flow is simple but tells a lot!
The last line I have to say, it's amazing
We cry as we admit to a school and on the last day too we are sad leaving it!
I'm a 9th grader well, 3 years to go...

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you tazeen 😊...for a kind review