Makin An awesome life

Poem is based on real life..

From every drop of tear,
I thought why do I live?.
there was hidden sorrows,
And each smile was fake.

They told me to do what I can't,
Some like to move on.

I was alone, Had no one for
My feelings to share on.

   

Provoked by others happiness,
I stood up, its time to live.
it took some time,
atlast, I realized i can be a gem.

Enjoying my own company makes me feel loads better,   

Thereafter I met some people just insane
as I am, Said living alone what for.?  

Now I am happy,nothing to cry,
Because I have something worth living for.

Author's Note

Ignore grammer mistakes.

Reviews

[Red Rose]

Love it!
I swear u are gettin better and better.
It's really well written with a beautiful meaning.
But I would like a bit more on how you became happy. After all the title is "making an awesome life". So yeah.. But thats just my opinion tho..
Great job!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you for your very kind review...it means alott to me

[Najam Us Saher]

In your words this poem is wowiieee 😀 I am glad I came across it. I liked the change in this poem in the beginning it expressed miseries of life and then in the end expressions of courage. Beautifully written.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Beautifully caught saher keep visiting...

[Farhan Shaikh]

Ur review always matters

[Najam Us Saher]

Yeah I will.... ☺

[Johnny Dep]

You got someone to share with, am happy for you Farhan.
Keep sharing.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Hehe ..thank you johny😊

[Valentine]

Well expressed feelings. Getting outside of ourselves often helps. Valentine

[alexis]

this is really close.great job and thanks

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thnk you so mch

[bibin Sebastian]

good moral sense you have attached. it is wonderful. now start to writing about other themes than personal ones. that will do good for your poetic career wonderful piece of poem. good luck

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you very much...for ur kind review

[iamshadowine]

"From every drop of tear,
I thought why do I live?.
there was hidden sorrows,
And each smile was fake."

such an honest poem :) i love how you highlight your emotions here.

keep writing :D

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you for your kind review...It means alot to me😉😊