Congratulations Farhan for always trying to write something different. You are just 17 yet you write very nicely. I see really a good writer in you.
A walk to nowhere- we all get tired at some point of time in life and feel like keep on going to some place unknown without being seen and without being herd. I loved the content of this poem.
Nice imagery too, you have used very nice words throughout.
Keep experimenting and keep writing, Farhan!
You are going in a right direction.
Life is need and proper place.
"Walk in peace, nature's surround,
Ain't any destiny,imaginations all around.
Close up eyes, there's no aware,
Its my walk to nowhere."
Sometime. Quiet time is needed. Thank you Farhan for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
I like that, the idea of walking to nowhere just to be free from the constraints that hold us back in our day to day lives. These walks can become like reboots for our mind, cleansing all the junk collected and dumping all the files that collects in our brains, with no other reason that it's been caught in the net of thought and will only be a distraction later on. It has put me in the mood for a walk right now, lthough I may just have another coffee first, it's freezing out :)
I wish everyone be as care free as you just kidding 😄 It's a poem which shows the nothingness and emptiness in a situation. I liked the entire poem and the title especially. I can relate with this poem I feel the same sometimes. Very well written.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Thank you..saher😁..well its just something deep down I imagined this that if this happens!..well .. read moreThank you..saher😁..well its just something deep down I imagined this that if this happens!..well thank u for ur kind review