Enter Judith Phaedra with her Tarot reading doll She stepped out of the canvas with a bleeding southern drawl Shell-shocked rats in alleys scamper, looking for the nest To escape the anesthetic of her opiate laced breast
She walks on crooked leg bones from the foothills to the shore I've oft times heard her scratching at my window or my door With her fingers long and twisted, corset of stained lace She roams my empty hallways in search of my embrace
Return Judith Phaedra with your tarot reading doll To that bleak and lonely canvas, draped beneath a violet shawl Let your long and twisted fingers rest in oil in your frame And no more roam my hallways from the nightmare which you came
Rip you to shreds!!!! Heck-no! This is downright brilliance, if I ever read such! Imagery, narrative, musicality - stupendous! This poem lives, breathes, and dances its heart out. Well done!
Ok, this totally creeped me out. I mean, its still daytime, and yet, wow....I could picture her, and those long, twisted fingers, coming about, trying to access your home. And I could even imagine, you, sitting in a corner, sweating in cold, and your heart beating so fast, that you could barely hold your breath, awaiting for her to leave. Man, hopefully, I do not dream of this, myself...lol.Great piece.