I Cry In The Rain

It's just prose writing, just go with the flow! :D

I like to dance in the rain,

everyone calls me insane

O what a shame,

Now they are being lame

They don't know I cry in the rain,

and I think it is sane

I cry all my pain away,

'cause I just went astray

I think rain is my best friend,

it hides my tears till the end

It has been doing this, like it's the trend

Like heaven's gift has been send

It hides my emotions,

without any cautions

With tiny drops, which cheers

wash away all of my tears

Author's Note

It just came to my mind, and is prose writing. Hope U'll enjoy! :)

Reviews

[Bushra Naqshbandi]

A simple and emotional poem written nicely. You've expressed yourself well and it is easy to form an emotional connection with it. Well done. :)

I think rain is my best friend,
it hides my tears till the end
I loved these lines. Beautifully written! :)

Like heaven's gift has been send
The line is well thought and I applaud you for it but since it is ''has been'' hence it should be ''sent'' instead of ''send''.

With tiny drops, which cheers
wash away all of my tears
Since you've written ''with tiny drops which...'' it means you're talking about the drops cheering you up and hence the verse should be ''with tiny drops which cheer'' but since the rhyming scheme will get affected you could change it to ''with tiny drops, it cheers''.
In the next verse, it should be ''washes away all of my tears'' and not ''wash away.....''

A great piece on the whole. Keep writing more! :)

[Stan Lee]

Beautiful albeit melancholy poem Dreamer. Sometimes a good cry is just what we need. Thanks for sharing. :)

[I Am Svetlana]

Creative and I enjoyed the rhyming! Tears are always healing when you need a good cry by yourself, even better in the rain cause it doesn't feel like your crying. Rain makes you feel new when you stand in it. The raindrops bathe you of every bad feeling you hold inside. No need for an umbrella!

[Cara]

amazing poem, deserves to be on the favorites list, loved it thank you for sharing

[Relic]

~The rain is an excellent camouflage for tears. Many poems have been written about the rain and this one is worthy of the read.~

[Rajat malik]

this is so cute :) nice rhyming and sweet poem.... though a bit sad

[Irenic]

I like to dance in the rain,
everyone calls me insane
O what a shame,
Now they are being lame

Very well written poem. Your poem makes the emotion of melancholiness visible. Exceriation could be felt

[Riv]

I love this, your use of words does it well to convey your feelings to the writer. I feel there is a lot of truth in it to other people as well.

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice use of story and the rain in the poem.
"It hides my emotions,
without any cautions
With tiny drops, which cheers
wash away all of my tears"
The rain had been hiding tears for us for a long time. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[ANTO]

It a beautiful scene like one from a 1960s movie where the leading lady is such fun throughout the movie but when she dances playfully in the rain she loses it and cries but hides her pain with thanks to the rain on her face which disguises it. I really get it.
Thanks for sharing.