I Cry In The Rain

It's just prose writing, just go with the flow! :D

I like to dance in the rain,

everyone calls me insane

O what a shame,

Now they are being lame

They don't know I cry in the rain,

and I think it is sane

I cry all my pain away,

'cause I just went astray

I think rain is my best friend,

it hides my tears till the end

It has been doing this, like it's the trend

Like heaven's gift has been send

It hides my emotions,

without any cautions

With tiny drops, which cheers

wash away all of my tears

Author's Note

It just came to my mind, and is prose writing. Hope U'll enjoy! :)

Reviews

[Ashwin Thakur]

Always beautiful to read your work sis
Beautiful description on hidden emotions hided by the rain
Awesome:):)

[nazia]

Sounds like the quote of Charlie Chaplin. I like crying in the rain for no one can see me crying.. Its a beautiful work. Enjoyed it :)

[Kousika]

Cute...awesome..lovely.....
You have portrayed the feelings in a very beautiful manner..
My friend and myself enjoyed this so much.. You have greatly made the readers to feel your feelings..
Congratssssss...........

[emmajoy]

'They don't know I cry in the rain, - and I think it is sane.. '

You've expressed your thoughts so wonderfully well. They, your thoughts, feelings, flow like the streams that kind rain creates. Rain baptises the spirit, cleanses the grey, brightena the world around someone willing to see more than the average. Nest time you walk in the rain, let me share the puddles, please.. you have such a deft way or showing self a little more and same time, provide a lovely bright light.

[sereenaoutloud]

I love being inside and listening to the rain..the sound is so peaceful to me!!
great write! :)

[Amber Lily]

Rain is indeed very calming in it's own way. It's beautiful yet some represent it with sadness. Rain has never made me feel sad, it's refreshing! A great poem, love the rhymes. :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

Yup same Here! Thank YOU so much for Ur review! :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

same pinch..............
i do that always.............but somehow after a while rain makes me smile...........
beautiful poem..........
i loved it!!!
:)

[Destiny Dreamer]

Good! :D Same here :) Thank You so much for checking :)

[Brinleigh Bailey]

Love how the poem expresses your sadness with a positive turn. Very well done.

[Destiny Dreamer]

Thanks Dear! Your words are very ENCOURAGING! :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

As always...i do like this. I hope you know the ratin cause i may just forget to write it in the review... oh right its 100#

[Destiny Dreamer]

Haha :D Thank You very very much! :)

[Robert]

Very clever Dreamer. You have a way with the rhyme I will say. Nicely done.

[Destiny Dreamer]

Thank YOU! :) I love Rhyming very very much. I just feel that Poem is incomplete without rhythm! Just personal opinion. Thanks A lot :)