Ask Your Heart

"We often live the way others wants us to live. We give up our dreams but just for once stop listening to others opinions and ASK YOUR HEART!"

Ask Your Heart

Life lived many years,

with so many rare fears

Fear of other's thoughts,

worked on their shoulds and their Oughts

Killed our opinions one by one,

let go of our dreams, like we had none

Listened to what others say,

noted every single of their phrase

Changed our lives, changed our dreams

That's how you think you can shut their screams

More so, changed the way you look,

with their every word, your head, you shook

Often hurt deeply by what they say

But still you work their way

Live not in the world so dark

Brighten up your colours and let them spark

Live you life, live it your way,

ask your Heart what it really say

Give up not, on yourself and your dreams

Doesn't matter how hard it may seems

Listen to your heart, listen to what it says

Let not you dreams just fade in the haze

Show the world your burning spark,

live your life to full, do leave your marks 

Author's Note

Hope You guys will like it, THANKS FOR VISITING! :)

Reviews

[Maan]

Its never possible to satisfy others, the lacking and hollowness which they have inside them never let them shut up.
Its not possible either to discard them out of your life. You gotta learn a way to keep listening them without letting it hurt you or your dreams.
:) Its a good poem, almost every human can relate to it.

[Destiny Dreamer]

Yup you're RIGHT! ... And THANK YOU so much for your kind word, thankyou so mUch!

[Amber Lily]

this is great! I'm loving the positivity here. This is truly something people need to hear, the world definitely needs more originality! It's plain and simple, JUST BE YOU! Thank you for spreading this to people, great job :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

Yup! Everyone is just so Unique. They should admire it instead of running after someone they are not :/ And Thanks A lot for Ur review :*:*:*

[Lady Lola]

A powerful poem! It's great that you're encouraging people to be their innermost self.

[Destiny Dreamer]

Thank YOU so much! :)

[yvo miki]

this is a good poem i loved it and has good points i never looked at

[Destiny Dreamer]

Well, Thank YOU so much Yvo ... :D Glad U read it :)

[Sudeep Mishra]

Dream to imagine, work to execute.
Nice pieces of work squeezed out of a poetic dream.

[Destiny Dreamer]

:D Thank YOU very muCh ^_^

[R Smith]

ask your heart but check it out with those who may know more, just don't let those dreams fade, its easy to let them slip away when your looking the other way, write on Dreamer you have much to offer :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

Awww Thank YOU very very very much! Your review means so so so so much to me! ^_^

[Anne Verona]

Wow. This poem is an arrow straight to my heart. Honestly, this poem is almost a summary of a huge part of my life, and so when I read the first verse, I could hardly keep myself away from reading the rest. We live this life only once. Even if reincarnation is true, our probable reincarnated lives won't know about the life that's past, and more so, can't do anything about it. We live this life only once literally and figuratively, so we should not allow ourselves to live someone else's dream. Because it's just the most tragic thing one could do for oneself, and it's literally and figuratively one form of suicide.

Anyway... I've gone so far... That's just what happens when I've been so affected by such a beautiful and an amazing poem :) So... amazing poem, beautiful :) And now I look forward to reading more of your works :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

WOW!!! Thats a HUGE HUGE HUGE Compliment. THANK YOU so much. I am just freaking out. Very glad that you liked it so much. And you are absolutely right, we live once so we should just free our selves from the prison of others thoughts and opinions, and do what we do, BE YOURSELF! Thanks once again dear friend!

[Anne Verona]

No problem :) And yes, exactly. Be yourself, and as you have written, "ask your Heart what it really say" :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

YUP! :) :) :)

[fattycbreezy52]

This is such a motivating writeup on your part.I should really try communicating with my pear

[Destiny Dreamer]

Yeah sUre :) Thanks A lot. Glad it motivate YOU! :) :*

[Irenic]

Live you life, live it your way,
ask your Heart what it really say
Give up not, on yourself and your dreams
Doesn't matter how hard it may seems

Listen to your heart, listen to what it says
Let not you dreams just fade in the haze
Show the world your burning spark,
live your life to full, do leave your marks

very interesting poem which lesson of following your path not others whether they are insisting or not. thank you for sharing such an amazing and encouraging piece with us.

[Destiny Dreamer]

Yeah U get it right! Thank YOU so much for stopping by! And I'm truly glad that YOU likeD it! :)

[Irenic]

Welcome :) dear

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree.
"Listen to your heart, listen to what it says
Let not you dreams just fade in the haze
Show the world your burning spark,
live your life to full, do leave your marks "
Follow a less travel path and hold on to your dreams. In the end. We must look back and wonder. Did we live our life or we controlled. Better to have know some freedom. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Destiny Dreamer]

Thank YOU very much.. You are absolutely Correct! Freedom is really very important to have success!

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree and you are welcome.