Serendipity

Just a small free-lance poem that happened to come to me after watching Alice in Wonderland, and deep thinking. :)

As I build ivory castles in the air, you're constantly swimming around my awareness.

Delightful hysteria, please, visit me more often!

If Rabbits could sing, and Emeralds bring

You back to me, Dear One, I would be ever so grateful.

For now, I bask, in that perfumed dementia for evermore

With You, My Love.

Reviews

[WhiteWillow]

A wonderfully whimsical write, full of longing. Beautifully done.

[Stella]

I really liked the fantasy like quality of your poem. Great Job!

[The XYZ Writer]

Those short verses gave me a feeling of fantasy and mysticism. Great job!

[Seshat Nidaba]

I wouldn't call it mystical exactly, but it's certainly a coherent fantasy world full of love.

[Sukriti Suki]

This is mystic and the imagery is very beautiful.....nice!

[FineFrenzy]

I am captured by both the beauty of your words and of the feelings you have conveyed in this lovely poem. Truly amazing.

[Raven Starhawk]

In so few words you managed to harness my focus and drive it a place of mystical dwellings where I marvel in your brilliant beauty.

[SR Urie]

Such a fortunate discovery I've made by accident; your beauty. BZ