me?!

"me?!"

I try so hard to get everything what I want

I learn more about it

know how much it will gonna have been 

Your sorrow bring me back 

The first time it immediately rushed 

Away from where I am 

Finding the right one 

For the purpose of life 

Has been more important things 

To see the world attached me

Just now but will not change 

My mind is blow-up 

First time it takes 

To get through to the best price 

in each affairs below to find out 

Last longer than the silence life 

Reviews

[Horizons]

Here, you express the shades of your heartaches, & pain to this page with much emotions. Well dear, the love leaves scars upon your spirit that wanders along time across the life, though the love also brings you much memories either which remind you the past-time where you`ve been once a time. And, when you look over at such things and remind that oh.. the pain`s left in past with past, then you come to know, the meaning of life & starts valuing the love with peace and happiness. Very deep poetry you`ve come up with. I`m sure, this write has arrived from the shells of your wounded heart to this page... with much heartfelt emotions. Keep writing!

[Al]

You. Always getting me to what I've done, each words each day each nights .ily!

[armin]

I liked the way you started it off.
The third stanza is very well written.
I enjoyed the read.

armin. ...

[Al]

Oh hey thanks Armin!