Winged.

 

 Winged.

 

Allowing love to open cages

hearts become winged,

knot-loose, ageless

and efficiently

unassailable.

Reviews

[Vin]

why did u stop it??
That shows how well it is crafted

[Fay Slimm]

You are so right Vin - the piece called for no more and there I left it - - ah - usually I being a bit of a chatterbox find added points to make.. thank you loads for dropping by and leaving your comment.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow, this is a favorite...the shape is like that of a wing...
and if free to fly....we love effortlessly...

love this one...
such efficient use of words,
j.

[Fay Slimm]

Ah - thanks for the visit and comment jacob - - so pleased you like the form and wording - I like writing structured verse and this one also called for brevity..... I really appreciate your support.

[Fran Marie]

A lovely brief write here, Fay,
love does let one's heart take flight if we allow it..
nice work

[Fay Slimm]

Yes love when freed can become an inspiration for all sorts of changes - - thank you so much for your visit and read Fran.

[Fran Marie]

So veryy welcome

[Neville]

How terribly and touchingly true ... Delightfully done my friend ..... N

[Fay Slimm]

Thought a piece of less is more might fit the bill here Nev.......... thanks a bunch for your lovely support........... Fay

[Neville]

always a pleasure Fay and always mine