Lovescape.

 

 

Lovescape.

 

I am soft-sift in thine hands.
Fast as in an hourglass the drift
toward moments of intimate fancy
as thy kisses drench my expectant skin.

 

I am drawn to this Lovescape.
Fired by thy moth-soft voice I lie
and view in thine blaze of blue-jay 
eyes bliss over-riding female shyness.

 

I am much blown away by need.
Burnt to a frazzle in hunger's bowl, 
half-sunk under fire's thirsty heaves 
is my first resistance to passionate role.

 

I am sealed by thy fervour.
Bathed by zeal's desired flavour
and close to yield I vote thy court
favoured thus to love must I capitulate.

 

Reviews

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

This one is powerful, Fay.
This is a romantic poetic piece,
Well written to captivate the attention of the reader at a glance.
I can't imagine myself reading it over and over again without feeling exhausted.

This is one of a kind.

[Fay Slimm]

Thank you so much for your visit and read Kay - - your comment shows why you like the read and that makes me so pleased. Thank you again.

[Neville]

This is just so darn good .. a stand alone poem and certainly one of them that needs to be read and enjoyed over and over till the page be thumb leaf thinned......... That last bit was my attempt to be clever... sorry.

If these words dont get the attention they so desperately deserve I shall eat my pen and note pad... so I shall.................... Neville

[Fay Slimm]

Your comment shows a very warm heart and thank ou Neville........... glad you were "blown away"