Exciting.

 

 

Exciting.

 

With tide at its highest the estuary
shimmers,
each filling inlet a labyrinth of
vigour.

The union of beauty and abstracted
silence
lures incoming bevies of feathered
wildness.

Sea-wind unfurls and with a first
shiver
wingbeats fast up-rise in palpable
rhythm.
 

Exciting as shore-line glitters with
welcome
an early start visit has proved truly
blessed.

Diamanté fragrance could lift each
dull day
if  sun-rising memories in my mind 
would stay.

Reviews

[Neville]

Your obvious enthusiasm for all things of this earth both natural and naturerous (new word) but applicable methinks, spills over and leaves your reader in no doubt that poetry is not only a magnificent art form and means of expression but a force to be reckoned with too....... A mighty fine write Fay.....

Neville

[Fay Slimm]

Your thoughtful review is most appreciated today Nev - - and a big thank you for that natty new word.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i can't write like this...to enhance nature to this extent with such beautifully descriptive words...each poem of yours that deals with dawns and sunsets is just a perfectly worded photo...
j.

[Fay Slimm]

I use my curiosity and after that it's just my imagination taking its toll my friend - pleased that you like my words however.