Treasured.

 

 

Treasured.

 

I remember that day,
a grainy twilight draining sky's colour,
strange iridescent skin
on the water and wind lifting my hair.
I remember the burst
of birds into flight from silhouette trees,
limestone luminescence
and the damp of rocks cooling my feet.
Such peace I remember 
as I waited for you and our rendezvous,
nervous, yet love grew
memories never so treasured as then.

 

Reviews

[Neville]

Tis moments like these captured that poetry is about....

[Fay Slimm]

Truly agreed my friend. Thanking you greatly for your read and review of Treasured.

[Neville]

tis smashing....

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love grows within your adjectives and lovely description..."I remember the burst"
there is a burst of romance propelled by nature's background.
j.

[Fay Slimm]

Your reviews always give me reason to write more my friend - thank you so much for your support.