Ethereal Music.

 

 

Ethereal Music.

 

Shadowy movements of ethereal
music play nebulous games
with the moonlight's white fingers
across uncanny skyscapes.

 

Tonight diaphanous curl of filmy
grey smoke whispers its
journey along water's dark mask
with swirls of limpidity.

 

Time abandoned tiffany dances 
mosaic of dewdrop-beauty 
on a blackening trout's fishy back
making striated translucence.

 

Thru' glassy mist night-jet hangs
gauze over sickle-shaped
glow netting half-lit luna lantern 
with pale flickered moon-face.

 

Clouds part and I stand entranced
as the rare yellow ghost
of a flimsy late rainbow skims past
leaving its spell for a moment.

Reviews

[Neville]

impossible to read and take in fully within a single session .. these words are quite exquisite first time round but both need, and are so deserving of subsequent visits in order to appreciate their full beauty...

Neville

[Fay Slimm]

Your kind words are support enough dear friend for my pen to keep me busy with writing - - - thank you indeed for your visit and interest...........x

[Neville]

as ever welcome :)

[emmajoy]

'Time abandoned tiffany dance - mosaic of dewdrop-beauty- on a blackening trout's fishy back- making striated translucence. '

Rich phrases describing colourful moments: a series of haunting glimpses very beautifully penned, Fay.

[Fay Slimm]

Sincere thanks Emma for your encouraging comment on Ethereal Music - they were indeed colourful moments to record and remember with a few words.

[emmajoy]

They reminded/remind me of Ken Simm's glimpses of moments, what they show and should always be noticed. Your way of wording might be different but they catch fleeting happenings.. and those are the memorable ones, Fay. Take care, keep safe.