Sound.

 

 

Sound.

 

Ground shakes
as massive breakers force reverberation.

 

Blast booms
on granite as vibration crashes in spume.

 

Waves break
over ground gradation as din accelerates.

 

Swell sound
cracks as liquid hits rock and fall rebounds.

 

Water weight
trapping soaked air roars with anticipation.

 

Before long
tide will turn round for another shore-song.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Your use of words in your writing is as mighty as its use of language. To talk of wash and flow would undermine the movement of water, all of its power and grandeur - its shuddering noise until.. till. it tires, rest s - gently trickles a shore -song.. Beautiful writing.. and oh so very visual, Fay.

[Neville]

....................................... tis the way it truly happens .. let us all enjoy it while we can
....................................... Neville