Did You Really Want the Good?

Did You Really Want the Good?

A Poem by Fia Naturie

 I laugh because you don't see the blood dripping from my nails

 Be a good girl you said

 You want to be my good girl

 I never agreed to be good in any way shape or fashion


 I'll be good for that second and then the bad comes out

 You like the bad. you just don't want to say it

 The bad wears red lipstick

 The bad wears pointy heels

 The bad takes you places that the good cannot


 I laugh because the good left a long time ago

 I give you the shadow of the good

  While the bad takes what it wants


 Oh come here let me treat you as you want to be treated

 Let me massage those aching muscle

 Let me caress every part of you


  The bad wants out to play

 It likes the feel of your flesh between its lips

 It does not want you to moan

 It wants to hear you yell out


 Good and bad opposite sides of the coin

 The good has been rubbed off and overtaken


 Come here and take my bad because it will feel so good

© 2025 Fia Naturie


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Wow! so much energy here in this poem.....:)

I liked these lines:
I laugh because you don't see the blood dripping from my nails
Be a good girl you said
You want to be my good girl
I never agreed to be good in any way shape or fashion

As humans I feel that we all undergo this battle between the "good" and "bad" inside us....what a great journey we are on...

thanks for sharing this ....feel free to stop by and check out one of my poems ....

BB73

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fia Naturie

6 Months Ago

Thank you for reading and commenting. Its nice that you felt this.



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That massage part sounds good. Perhaps the bad is not so bad, after all.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Good girls go to heaven but bad girls go everywhere. When I'm good, I'm VERY good but when I'm bad, I'm better." " Mae West This had that sort of stiletto heel kick to it before kissing the emotional bruise left behind. Cool stuff.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fia Naturie

6 Months Ago

Thank you for reading this.
you set a pretty raunchy scene here with well chosen words; like the juxtaposition of the good and the bad.. unfortunately there is plenty of seedy bad.. and it can trap you….even if it feels good….
Warmly, B





Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fia Naturie

6 Months Ago

Thank you, I agree it can trap a person.
Betty Hermelee

6 Months Ago

You are very welcome 🌷
Warmly
B
Wow! so much energy here in this poem.....:)

I liked these lines:
I laugh because you don't see the blood dripping from my nails
Be a good girl you said
You want to be my good girl
I never agreed to be good in any way shape or fashion

As humans I feel that we all undergo this battle between the "good" and "bad" inside us....what a great journey we are on...

thanks for sharing this ....feel free to stop by and check out one of my poems ....

BB73

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fia Naturie

6 Months Ago

Thank you for reading and commenting. Its nice that you felt this.

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Added on June 16, 2025
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