Grasping the Lasting Day's Love

When I have fears that I may cease to feed.

Before my pen has felt my thoughtful brain,

Before high-piled books, I plan to read,

Held like rich man's money clip, impossible to drain.

When I behold, upon the night's scared face,

Unique misty symbols of a true romance,

And think that I may never live to truly embrace

Her feelings, with the flow of a dance.

And when I feel, the fair creature of an hour,

That I shall never look upon you more,

Never have taken in the fiery power

Of relenting love; then on the shore

Of the wide world I stand alone, and think

Can I grasp this love before we both sink?

Reviews

[SyberRose]

Nicely done...Enjoyed very much and I like your name...SyberRose

[Eloha]

I love this! It's a form I can appreciate.

[metapendrius]

Nice job

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

Beautiful, just beautiful.
100/100

[Sunshadow Coyote]

thank you im glad you liked it

[Odayin]

My second favorite from you. Definitely worthy.
Amazing job, I like the irony