Return to Family

Infinity bends before my dimming eyes
As I wonder if this is death
As my mind wanders I hear many voices
They tell me it's not my time
To go back and return

I don't want to leave
I truly don't
And yet I know I must
So with tearful goodbyes I turn away
Returning to the place that killed me
And yet it didn't kill me
Now my thoughts remain
On what I left behind
And when I can return
To return to my family
Para volver a mi familia
Per tornare alla mia famiglia
Um zu meiner Familie zurückkehren

Reviews

[Rin Kagamine]

This is lovely. It's heartfelt and beautiful. One can feel the emotions the speaker projects.

[Chris Atkinson]

Infinity bends before my dimming eyes
As I wonder if this is death
As my mind wanders I hear many voices
They tell me it's not my time
To go back and return.

fantastic as always Fox, I love that section and you express your emotion perfectly

[Fenix Flight]

Now my thoughts remain
On what I left behind
And when I can return
To return to my family

Love this last line. This poem is so wonderful I dont know how to describe it. As Always though your pome was a delight to read. Thanks for sharing it :-D

[Sami Khalil]

" don't want to leave
I truly don't
And yet I know I must
So with tearful goodbyes I turn away
Returning to the place that killed me"

This was lovely and touching. Your thoughts return as you remain...Bravo...............

[FireFox9]

Thank you Sam that means a lot. Fox-

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)............................

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

Infinity bends before my dimming eyes( this line really portray an ending world...)
As I wonder if this is death
As my mind wanders I hear many voices
They tell me it's not my time
To go back and return (this stanza complement the first line very well)

Para volver a mi familia
Per tornare alla mia famiglia
Um zu meiner Familie zurückkehren (i don't understand this but it sounds nice the way i pronounce it)
such stanza deserve audios or us to know the pronunciation

[FireFox9]

It's German, but thanks. Fox-

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

The pull of family love has brought many back from the brink of death.
Love this little poem.
Regards. Clive.