Addicted

Like a drug
I'm addicted to you
Just seeing you
Gives me a high
A day without you
Puts me in withdrawal
Your stare
Makes me go out of control
Hearing your voice in my ear at night
Makes me want to taste you
I'll never want to waste this time we have
You are a limited supply, I know
I'll make the best of you

Reviews

[Brandon Lee]

Good stuff, but I feel if the lines were shorter and maybe more direct, the feelings you're trying to impart will hit home a lot stronger.

-Brandon