My Fault

Just something I need to vent..

Someone give me CPR,

or a blood transfusion.

My heart has stopped,

and my veins are empty.

What pumped my heart is gone.

And there is no love in my veins.

Only fear.

Colder than ice.

Only a smile can warm me.

Or a few simple words.

The only ones I wont hear..

Reviews

[J.Black]

It's okay Jess, "I love yous" are overrated anyways! ;)

[Nicole]

Ohhh, it was chilling. I really liked it, and I usually don't like poems. Good job!

[Crusaderscross]

Thanks for the reviews. Appreciate it. I really like your style of writing. Ressembles mine in ways. I enjoyed this poem...or venting...:). We can feel the reader choking and wrestling with emotions. Loved it

[Taylor H.]

loved the first stanza! i hope you feel better :)