Fading to Black

One of these days,

you're going to be looking.

You wont like what you find.
The old girl is gone;

Replaced with a ticking time bomb

of a woman.

I'm letting you go.

Slowly.

Fading to black.

Reviews

[Alex W]

I have absoloutely no idea what this is. But I like it lol :-)

Nice little piece, kudos!

[J.Black]

YES! I knew Jess' had a certain connection. I felt this one too.

[GamingGal]

Pros: For some odd reason, this poem made me grin. I love the story here! I can't quite explain it, oh but I wish I could. It just....appeals to me. A lot. I like that you have it centered. Some poems should be centered, some shouldn't. This one should. The abruptness of the sentences is nice, and the entire thing flows in this interesting, ticking sort of way :)

Cons: None whatsoever.

Overall: This is being added to my favorites.