Love me or back off

Don't push me to the edge, i will jump

You say you love me,
but you shout at me
You say you trying,
but you loose your temper with me
You say you want me to stay,
but you push me away

 

You don’t know when to quit,
you push me so hard
One day you will walk through the door
and I will be gone

It is when you have lost that you relies what you had, I truly hope that the eyes are opened before the sand is poring.

 

Reviews

[Rhine Wolf]

you stole my line!!! LOL!
still a very good poem. great flow, and originality. well done.

Blessed be!
Fallon.

[W.Piggy]

Wow. Great poem. I love the flow of it.
I espescially like the last line, great creativity. :)
You're a really great writer, it's nice, simple and full of expression in it.
Very powerful.
Keep it up.

W.Piggy