What I am left with

Moving too fast

 

I jumped before I looked

 

I talked before I thought

 

I wanted before I needed

 

I took before I asked

 

Now I am left with

 

Nothing to look at

 

Nothing to need

 

Nothing to ask

 

and no-one to talk

Reviews

[W.Piggy]

It's a beutiful poem, i enjoyed reading it.
It's so hard when you feel like everything is loast, sometimes i feel like that and it's always hard to go through those times.
I loved it a lot.
It's simple yet so powerful and calming yet full of emotions. :)
The pattern and rhythm was nice too, how you started with all 'i's and then it was left with nothing. I thought that was pretty smart and layed out perfectly.
You're really talented. Keep it up.

W.Piggy

[Rhine Wolf]

This one is very powerful and makes your reader think of the things that they may have taken for granted and squandered.

I love the simplicity of it nothing fancy or elaborate just straight forward words and felling. nicely done here.

Blessed be.
Fallon