A LIFE THAT IS NOT MINE

Breaking The Chains.

A day of celebration and  play
Turned into a day of running, panic and judgment
She had no time to sit nor relax

She was tired of been someone she was not
Give me my life back
I don’t want to be, what you want me to be
I want to be my own person
I am drowning in this life you have chosen for me
I had so many dreams for myself
Now I am living a life that is not mine
I sit and wonder if I am the person I was meant to be

The girl that is sitting here
Is not the girl that was meant to be living this life
She is hidden so far into the darkness
She is chocking on the very thing she needed
She can see the path she should follow
But does she want to choose that path?
Only time will tell
But for now just let her be

 

Reviews

[Rhine Wolf]

This is so sad to live under the shadow of anothers wishes. This is not to live but to exsist, i have personal experiance in this, having lived on bothsides of the fence. this is well composed in expressing you feelings.

as to the flow of the poem i feel that you could maybe relooking at the wording and refrase some some of it to create a smoother flowing piece but if you are not going for flow then it is good as it is.

Blessed be.
Fallon