What I have Done

Fixing my wrongs

My regrets not what I thought they'd be
I want to cleanse what I have done
It was done 

 Now I want to put it to the past

 

I will go back to the beginning and forgive
The winds of change are upon me
The hands of time are calling

I must submit to it
My life depends on it

I can see they care
I just am not ready to accept them

I need to find myself
Then I can come back

 

 

Reviews

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interesting...but life is not about finding who you are. it is about creating who you are or wish to be. How can you find that which you have not yet established? You cannot seek and find something you have not yet created?
ANyway thats my 2cents...lol
It is an interesting piece and the character in the poem needs to understand that. If you want to be a winner don't listen to the losers...lol Listen to the winners

[Poeticpiers]

i liked your theme M lady You write in free form not my favourite type of writing but even in free form to smooth the flow of your words try to keep your lines of even length Read aloud which is the acid test for all poetry if its sound choppy it is time to re edit until it flows like warm honey on pancakes.

[Rhine Wolf]

Not a bad write, i like how you have used some of the more classical expresions. well done.

Blessed be
Fallon