Rag Doll

This is basically standing up for myself, as a girl, as a person, against anyone who thought/thinks they're worthy of putting me down.

I'm not a toy here for your pleasure
I may be a girl but I'm not a doll
I have a past, a present and a future
I hurt when i feel pain and I smile when i feel happy
I have hobbies and interests, morals and standards
Hopes and dreams, fears and nightmares
When you prick me, I bleed
When you push me, I fall
And I can just as easily stand up to you and tell you where to go.

I AM NOT A TOY

Reviews

[Robert]

very good job here, i love the way you put yourself in a place of vunrability and then redeem it at the end and tell the guy off. very well rounded poem, well thought out statment.

good job
robert

[Mauricio Montoya]

Very well written and to the point.
Excellent write.

[~ Otto Girl ~]

very nice poem i like it. Cause we are all humans not some push doll or to be dragedd around nice work. Sincerely Otto girl.

[Scarlett]

Can I ask what please and thank you has to do with this poem?

[emmajoy]

Good for you!

I love the power and individuality to this, shows your worth, shows your character.

Remember though, to say 'please' now and again - failing that, 'thank you' :)