Feeling Of Love

Love is a feeling,

We all take to much.

Love is a gift,

And should be treated as such.

 

You must trust in it,

You must cherrish it.

Put up with all of its pain,

And all of its s**t.

 

We dont deserve love,

For we know not what it is.

Its only for the strong,

True love is not his...

 

 

10/13/09

Reviews

[DailyWyatt]

I love the way the poem is more of a F.Y.I peice than an emotional one i like the way you write

[Senseless whatever]

This is a good write. It flows well and starts off strong carrying to the end.

[Trikius]

Interesting perspective.