Moments

The time spent with loved ones and how important it is.

Isn't funny how time passes by? Moments measured like clouds in the sky. Wisping, whirling, floating away, Granting your wishes for another sunny day. Watching and waiting for a new day's shine, Not looking back at what's left behind. Always knowing this moment may pass, To hold love so tightly to pray that it will last. Never taking for granted a single day, Your moment is now though it will never stay. Grab hold of this moment and hold It so near, These moments for loved ones and those so dear.

Reviews

[Rachael Lea]

very sweet, and nicely done. It is very important to hold that knowledge, people tend to forget getting caught up in their lives and deadlines the don't see what they are being blessed with. You have a wonderful way of flowing your words and your work is very easy to follow great job!

[Gejodi]

You pen this so well! So many messages here in such a short poem. Never take life for granted, savor the time spent with love ones and especially dont dwell on the past but look to the future where more beautiful memories will unfold. Great work